New covenant for ufp?

On Sunday, April 4, we test-ran a possible new covenant. Here are the words. What do you think? If you’ve got feedback, please send it along to Rev. Julie. 

Grounded in love, 
   and enriched by our differences,
   we covenant with this gathered community… 
To embrace life with wonder and inquiry, 
   to welcome personal transformation, 
   to act for justice with compassion, 
   and to care for our home, the earth.  
In an unending quest for meaning, 
   and in service to the wellbeing of all,
   we make this covenant with joyful hearts.